This was a hilarious read, and I don't think it was on purpose. It was like reading what a Twilight fan would write about Twilight coming to life to spite the "haters". It's petty, unimaginative, but certainly easy to read as there is really not much to take in.
It's definitely fast-paced, but leaves you wondering why the author seems to think she understands string theory in the least.
It feels like the story is rushed so it can be written, rather than written so it can be felt and related to. It's definitely something for the fangirls' hearts. Junk teen fiction. Nothing to really enjoy or think about. It's written more to satisfy a fantasy.
For an author that talks loads about professional writing, I see very little evidence of it.